Pure Pulp: Hannah and the 'O' Button by A Pensive Pen

[Gromet]

You can view the story here on the plaza:

http://www.boundstories.net/storieslr/purepulp_hannahobutton.html
F/f; latex; lingerie; stockings; gloves; bond; rope; gag; dildo; hogtie; toys; insert; vibe; tease; climax; cons; X

Please feel free to leave your kind comments & feedback here about this story.

Thanks 

[Arkane]

A nice short story. The bindee decides everything at start, the binder seems to be at her service, but she may adjust intensity and severity of the bondage and, after being prudent at the start, slips into a more punishing role at the end.

[jackierabbit1]

I was very envious, the entire adventure sounds like something I would just love to do.

Thanks for sharing, Jackie.

[TeaSer]

Excellent story! Easy to read and very sexy.

[Arkane]

I think this story too needs to be expanded into a sequel.
The relationship between Hannah and Susan could be explored and explained more.

[A Pensive Pen]

Thank you everyone!

Arkane - You're right, it probably could be expanded, but I'm not going to write it. This was my take on writing "pulp" stories. Basically little vignettes or scenes that are fun but ultimately meaningless. Like a bondage dime western.

I would be happy to make a Pure Pulp "collection" of unrelated pulpy stories, if there's interest 

[Arkane]

I would be happy to make a Pure Pulp "collection" of unrelated pulpy stories, if there's interest 

I'm quite interested because I love short and medium length fiction, while I'm easily discouraged by longer stories, even more so if there's a lot of material unrelated to the meat of the plot. While I like detail (and I think your story could have been even better with just a bit more lingering in small particulars) I believe in economy of words.

[absolutist]

I would be happy to make a Pure Pulp "collection" of unrelated pulpy stories, if there's interest 

Since I enjoyed the result of your experiment I for one would be glad if you wrote more of these vignettes. Yet I also enjoy your longer and more complex stories very much... Can't we have both? ;-)

[A Pensive Pen]

Absolutely I can write both! Sorry if I implied otherwise.

Right now I actually have wayyyy more ideas than I have writing time, but there will be much more coming down the pipeline. One of the draws of Pure Pulp is that I can crank them out relatively quickly, but I have larger ideas planned as well. They may take a little time (my job is keeping me particularly busy right now), and I'm sorry for that, but they'll come through one way or another.

[jackierabbit1]

I think the pulp short scene concept is a wonderful one, but very difficult to write well, as you obviously have based on the number of comments generated is such a short time. Could all your stories of this kind be entries in the main characters diary, perhaps she, or some other soul reading them to reminisce about the fun she has had in life? It's just a suggestion, but it could be a good vehicle to present your short story work one scene at a time while still keeping them somewhat separate.

In any event thanks again for sharing and I do understand the busy at work thing as I am in the same proverbial boat, I not having enough time to write, nor read as much as I might like these days, Jackie. 

[feline]

I do like this, short and sweet, loving and gentle at first, yet as the bondage goes on, and all of the double checking has happened, it becomes increasingly relentless and wicked.  The trust, fun, friendship and love shine through here.  This does leave me wondering about these characters, and the broader setting, but this is simply fun, sexy and delightful, making it a wonderful glimpse into their world together

[ElectroPainLover]

Great story Pensive. I enjoyed it through and through. I could feel myself being tied as Susan tied Hannah. Made me feel as if I was in her position. Of course, due to excellent descriptive writing.

Great job Pensive.
Dana -- EPL