Author Topic: The Detectives And The Dominatrix by Rbbral  (Read 6929 times)

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The Detectives And The Dominatrix by Rbbral
« on: May 26, 2018, 06:09:05 am »
You can view the story here on the plaza:

http://www.latexstories.net/storiesad/detectivesandthedominatrix.html
Sbm; hotel; latex; catsuit; buttplug; hood; breathplay; cuffs; gag; death; police; investigation; MF/fm+; suspects; interview; discovery; dungeon; tease; flirt; femdom; cons/nc; X

http://www.latexstories.net/storiesad/detectivesandthedominatrix2.html
MF/fm+; police; investigation; suspects; interview; flirt; discovery; F/fm+; dungeon; trap; force; strip; latex; catsuit; bond; cuffs; gag; buttplug; hood; breathplay; inflation-sack; stuck; susp; oral; climax; cons/nc; XX

http://www.latexstories.net/storiesad/detectivesandthedominatrix3.html
MFF/f; police; suspect; recovery; emb; video; FF; discovery; offer; F/f; D/s; latex; catsuit; vacbed; bodybag; bond; cuffs; gag; buttplug; hood; susp; bdsm; spank; tease; denial; oral; climax; cons; X

http://www.latexstories.net/storiesad/detectivesandthedominatrix4.html
F/f+; FF; D/s; latex; catsuit; costume; vacbed; bodybag; bond; cuffs; gag; buttplug; hood; susp; bdsm; nipple; spank; paddle; cane; toys; tease; lesbian; kiss; denial; oral; climax; cons; X

http://www.latexstories.net/storiesad/detectivesandthedominatrix5.html
F/f+; F/m; D/s; latex; costumes; hoods; bond; bdsm; spank; paddle; bagged; nipple; tease; torment; emb; voy; video; lesbian; kiss; strapon; oral; anal; sex; climax; cons; X

http://www.latexstories.net/storiesad/detectivesandthedominatrix6.html
FM; M/f; D/s; bond; tease; emb; latex; hood; clothing; discovery; ponyplay; harness; corset; bitgag; blinkers; cart; rom; oral; sex; climax; cons; X

http://www.latexstories.net/storiesad/detectivesandthedominatrix7.html
FM; M/f; D/s; tease; bond; latex; hood; clothing; ponyplay; harness; corset; bitgag; blinkers; buttplug; boots; cart; outdoors; accident; punish; spank; force; wager; catsuit; chastity; oral; sex; climax; cons; X

http://www.latexstories.net/storiesad/detectivesandthedominatrix8.html
FM; F/m; D/s; bond; latex; ponyplay; harness; corset; blinders; buttplug; boots; cart; outdoors; MF+; surprise; meeting; pool; M/f; wager; dress; catsuit; public; emb; shop; tease; oral; sex; climax; cons; X

http://www.latexstories.net/storiesad/detectivesandthedominatrix9.html
FM; M/f; F/m; D/s; bond; latex; dress; catsuit; public; emb; shop; tease; hood; petplay; gimpsuit; buttplug; outdoors; cockring; chastity; oral; sex; anal; climax; cons; X

http://www.latexstories.net/storiesad/detectivesandthedominatrix10.html
FM; F/m; F/f+; D/s; bond; latex; dress; catsuit; hood; costume; nun; vacbed; encase; electro; tease; gimpsuit; buttplug; outdoors; cockring; chastity; strapon; oral; sex; anal; climax; cons; X


Please feel free to leave your kind comments and feedback about this story here.

Thanks  ;)
« Last Edit: August 30, 2018, 06:41:08 am by Gromet »

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Re: The Detectives And The Dominatrix by Rbbral
« Reply #1 on: May 26, 2018, 04:38:43 pm »
<applauds>

I know it's not quite the traditional fare for the site, a bit more plot and a bit less sex, but I very much enjoyed what's been written so far. Thank you!

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Re: The Detectives And The Dominatrix by Rbbral
« Reply #2 on: May 26, 2018, 06:50:45 pm »
Hang in there teanndaorsa, like most of my stories, this one is pretty long - 10 parts. I thought I'd try a more "conventional" story for a start, and then it warms up quite a bit in the following 8 parts. Thanks for your comments.

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Re: The Detectives And The Dominatrix by Rbbral
« Reply #3 on: May 26, 2018, 11:36:27 pm »
What an incredibly well written story!  Thank you so much for sharing it with us here on this Forum.  Glad to hear that there are more parts coming.
All the best,
Picofarad

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Re: The Detectives And The Dominatrix by Rbbral
« Reply #4 on: May 28, 2018, 12:37:16 pm »
This is great. I hope we don’t have too long to wait for the next instalment.
Cheers, Adam.

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Re: The Detectives And The Dominatrix by Rbbral
« Reply #5 on: May 29, 2018, 10:14:44 pm »
I always appreciate kind comments of encouragement. Thank you, and I hope you enjoy the remaining episodes.

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Re: The Detectives And The Dominatrix by Rbbral
« Reply #6 on: June 06, 2018, 10:11:59 am »
Hi Great story, really looking forward to the next installments.

I love it when people are forced to wear latex for the first time and discover the effect it can have over them!!

 many thanks for sharing hope we don't have too long to wait for the next chapter

Mactex

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Re: The Detectives And The Dominatrix by Rbbral
« Reply #7 on: June 07, 2018, 03:49:16 am »
Thank you, mactex. I'm sure Gromet and his team will post all the other episodes in good time. They do an absolutely fantastic job, and I'll leave them to it. All the best.

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Re: The Detectives And The Dominatrix by Rbbral
« Reply #8 on: June 09, 2018, 02:50:09 pm »
This is the quality of writing that I admire and hope to emulate. The characters are more fleshed out and have great promise individually as well as their interaction.

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Re: The Detectives And The Dominatrix by Rbbral
« Reply #9 on: June 10, 2018, 10:21:48 pm »
Thanks RubberH. I think I might have written to you before, for I really enjoy your writing too, Rubber Baroness is a favourite of mine and I liked Unconventional too. I really would like you to write more.
Apropos this story, I had a catastrophe the other day when my memory stick imploded and appeared to wipe out Parts 5 to 10 of this story. Over the last day or so I have managed to data recovery most of these parts although they are a bit messed up. Anyway, I'll get them to Gromet as soon as I can fix them (and before I mess them up again).
Thanks again for your comments.

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Re: The Detectives And The Dominatrix by Rbbral
« Reply #10 on: June 11, 2018, 02:55:01 pm »
What a truly wonderful story, thank you it is engaging and beautiful... I cannot wait for the next part.

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Re: The Detectives And The Dominatrix by Rbbral
« Reply #11 on: June 11, 2018, 09:26:14 pm »
Very nice work! I've always been of the opinion that there needs to be more to erotic stories than simply lots of sex. There has to be good writing, too. This series has all of that I want. Well done! Can't wait for the rest.

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Re: The Detectives And The Dominatrix by Rbbral
« Reply #12 on: June 12, 2018, 03:28:55 am »
Thanks to you both.
I love writing, I would continue to write even if I didn't get one response, but to hear from the readers is very encouraging, yes, keeps me going.
Lots more episodes to come, hang in there.

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Re: The Detectives And The Dominatrix by Rbbral
« Reply #13 on: June 14, 2018, 11:44:57 am »
Hi Al, So glad to see you've found your form again.  Loving this story, looking forward to the next turn, the next surprise.  Thanks Bert.

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Re: The Detectives And The Dominatrix by Rbbral
« Reply #14 on: June 14, 2018, 06:51:26 pm »
Thanks Bert, as always you are very generous, I hope you enjoy the other parts coming along

 

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