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« Last post by feline on April 15, 2024, 04:54:41 pm »
Chapter 16 is now up. Having already read this, I am not quite sure what I think, or how I feel about this, so lets have another look, and see if my views seem clearer on a second pass.
Well, things start with Tim, yet again, proving that he is a total arse, and probably should not be left in charge of, well, anyone. Certainly not a sex slave who is overly compliant. At the same time, I do feel the need to take issue with the sense of the comment that anal sex = pain. Obviously, and I totally agree, what is happening here is clearly painful for our slave, on several fronts, but the words paint the suggestion that in general, or perhaps just in Lucija's mind, anal sex has to hurt, which begs the question of why she is looking to try something unpleasant. Not for the first time, left wondering where Lucija is coming from in all of this.
And there we have it... blood on the condom... safety 101 has been FAILED, big time! Tim the bloody menace and arsehole strikes again...
It is interesting indeed to see Lucija stepping up to handle this situation, and to try and make sure both that Tim is taken care of, and that Heather gets the experiences, sexual usage and teasing that she needs and wants as well. This is so far from the "default and expected" reaction of a strong woman, to go out and make sure that the woman kept locked up in the cellar is getting used enough for sex. Also, Lucija is showing a surprising amount of responsibility towards Tim's behaviour, where no one else has stepped up to try and take him in hand, or make sure he isn't doing things he shouldn't.
I can hardly fault Lucija for crying, she has shouldered a LOT of responsibility here, taken things onto her shoulders that by most standards are clearly not hers to shoulder, but she has shouldered them anyway. She needs some outlet, and here is one form out outlet.
OK... WHAT THE FUCK?! Lucija has ordered Tim to get a prince albert piercing, and he has gone to do so, and he is also going to be paying for the matching cage... this is WELL past puppy love, and if Tim wasn't such a complete and total arsehole, I would be very tempted to call this whole situation abusive. Well, the thing is, we do have abuse, Tim is abusing the slut in the basement, and Lucija is abusing Tim. But at least Lucija's abuse is driven by Tim being the arsehole he is.
Still... what the hell?!?!
Then we switch to Lucija stepping up and moving to take care of Heather, to actually fix the problem that they are no longer making good use of her as a sex slave... how come she is the one realising and fixing this? Then again, she is still an outsider in some senses, and also, she didn't come to this realisation "naturally", it was definitely driven by walking in on that nasty abuse...
OK... now I didn't really catch this the first time through, but Lucija is actually smiling when pointing out that it is cruel to lock up the slut without constant sexual stimulation... the key word being stimulation, rather than any comment about orgasms... Lucija is, it seems, once more delighting in, and taking real and direct pleasure, from the idea of making sure that the slut in the basement is "punished" and "tormented", just sexually this time...
I can hardly fault Lucija for enjoying how much pain Tim is from his piercing, clearly very well deserved pain and punishment there!
Interesting to see Heath and Paula working out where they stand, relationship wise. A nice bit of character development there.
Seeing Heather's clear happiness at people appearing to abuse her makes it quite clear how much she has been missing out down there... the "fun and games" with Tim really weren't what she had signed up for, wants or needs, and also, quite simply, weren't safe.
Interesting to see what it takes for Heather to show concern at what they have planned for her!
OK, pins through the nipples, and pulled tight, I just really don't like needles. Just a personal thing, I don't have a phobia of them, I just don't find them sexy or erotic, so this just bothered me a bit, so moving on. But it was another point where I felt... unsettled, yes, that is a good word, during this part.
Nice to see Heath preferring his girlfriend to the captive slut, and it probably plays into her desires to be lesser, to be left out and not involved in his orgasm.
*sigh* vanilla Maggie... we need a whole-scale intervention!
All in all, one of those chapters that is important, has plot and character development, and even some fun sexy time, but for me, personally, not much fun sexy time, and plenty of bits that were just unsettling, or worse. Nothing wrong with that, but not a part that left me with the warm and happy feelings that other chapters have managed to do.
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