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Latex => Latex Website Stories Feedback => Topic started by: Gromet on May 26, 2018, 06:09:05 am
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You can view the story here on the plaza:
http://www.latexstories.net/storiesad/detectivesandthedominatrix.html
Sbm; hotel; latex; catsuit; buttplug; hood; breathplay; cuffs; gag; death; police; investigation; MF/fm+; suspects; interview; discovery; dungeon; tease; flirt; femdom; cons/nc; X
http://www.latexstories.net/storiesad/detectivesandthedominatrix2.html
MF/fm+; police; investigation; suspects; interview; flirt; discovery; F/fm+; dungeon; trap; force; strip; latex; catsuit; bond; cuffs; gag; buttplug; hood; breathplay; inflation-sack; stuck; susp; oral; climax; cons/nc; XX
http://www.latexstories.net/storiesad/detectivesandthedominatrix3.html
MFF/f; police; suspect; recovery; emb; video; FF; discovery; offer; F/f; D/s; latex; catsuit; vacbed; bodybag; bond; cuffs; gag; buttplug; hood; susp; bdsm; spank; tease; denial; oral; climax; cons; X
http://www.latexstories.net/storiesad/detectivesandthedominatrix4.html
F/f+; FF; D/s; latex; catsuit; costume; vacbed; bodybag; bond; cuffs; gag; buttplug; hood; susp; bdsm; nipple; spank; paddle; cane; toys; tease; lesbian; kiss; denial; oral; climax; cons; X
http://www.latexstories.net/storiesad/detectivesandthedominatrix5.html
F/f+; F/m; D/s; latex; costumes; hoods; bond; bdsm; spank; paddle; bagged; nipple; tease; torment; emb; voy; video; lesbian; kiss; strapon; oral; anal; sex; climax; cons; X
http://www.latexstories.net/storiesad/detectivesandthedominatrix6.html
FM; M/f; D/s; bond; tease; emb; latex; hood; clothing; discovery; ponyplay; harness; corset; bitgag; blinkers; cart; rom; oral; sex; climax; cons; X
http://www.latexstories.net/storiesad/detectivesandthedominatrix7.html
FM; M/f; D/s; tease; bond; latex; hood; clothing; ponyplay; harness; corset; bitgag; blinkers; buttplug; boots; cart; outdoors; accident; punish; spank; force; wager; catsuit; chastity; oral; sex; climax; cons; X
http://www.latexstories.net/storiesad/detectivesandthedominatrix8.html
FM; F/m; D/s; bond; latex; ponyplay; harness; corset; blinders; buttplug; boots; cart; outdoors; MF+; surprise; meeting; pool; M/f; wager; dress; catsuit; public; emb; shop; tease; oral; sex; climax; cons; X
http://www.latexstories.net/storiesad/detectivesandthedominatrix9.html
FM; M/f; F/m; D/s; bond; latex; dress; catsuit; public; emb; shop; tease; hood; petplay; gimpsuit; buttplug; outdoors; cockring; chastity; oral; sex; anal; climax; cons; X
http://www.latexstories.net/storiesad/detectivesandthedominatrix10.html
FM; F/m; F/f+; D/s; bond; latex; dress; catsuit; hood; costume; nun; vacbed; encase; electro; tease; gimpsuit; buttplug; outdoors; cockring; chastity; strapon; oral; sex; anal; climax; cons; X
Please feel free to leave your kind comments and feedback about this story here.
Thanks ;)
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I know it's not quite the traditional fare for the site, a bit more plot and a bit less sex, but I very much enjoyed what's been written so far. Thank you!
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Hang in there teanndaorsa, like most of my stories, this one is pretty long - 10 parts. I thought I'd try a more "conventional" story for a start, and then it warms up quite a bit in the following 8 parts. Thanks for your comments.
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What an incredibly well written story! Thank you so much for sharing it with us here on this Forum. Glad to hear that there are more parts coming.
All the best,
Picofarad
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This is great. I hope we don’t have too long to wait for the next instalment.
Cheers, Adam.
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I always appreciate kind comments of encouragement. Thank you, and I hope you enjoy the remaining episodes.
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Hi Great story, really looking forward to the next installments.
I love it when people are forced to wear latex for the first time and discover the effect it can have over them!!
many thanks for sharing hope we don't have too long to wait for the next chapter
Mactex
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Thank you, mactex. I'm sure Gromet and his team will post all the other episodes in good time. They do an absolutely fantastic job, and I'll leave them to it. All the best.
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This is the quality of writing that I admire and hope to emulate. The characters are more fleshed out and have great promise individually as well as their interaction.
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Thanks RubberH. I think I might have written to you before, for I really enjoy your writing too, Rubber Baroness is a favourite of mine and I liked Unconventional too. I really would like you to write more.
Apropos this story, I had a catastrophe the other day when my memory stick imploded and appeared to wipe out Parts 5 to 10 of this story. Over the last day or so I have managed to data recovery most of these parts although they are a bit messed up. Anyway, I'll get them to Gromet as soon as I can fix them (and before I mess them up again).
Thanks again for your comments.
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What a truly wonderful story, thank you it is engaging and beautiful... I cannot wait for the next part.
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Very nice work! I've always been of the opinion that there needs to be more to erotic stories than simply lots of sex. There has to be good writing, too. This series has all of that I want. Well done! Can't wait for the rest.
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Thanks to you both.
I love writing, I would continue to write even if I didn't get one response, but to hear from the readers is very encouraging, yes, keeps me going.
Lots more episodes to come, hang in there.
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Hi Al, So glad to see you've found your form again. Loving this story, looking forward to the next turn, the next surprise. Thanks Bert.
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Thanks Bert, as always you are very generous, I hope you enjoy the other parts coming along
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Hi Rbbral, As you have said its not upto you, however I wish Gromet would hurry up and post the next chapters! very interested to find out how she ensnares the Detective.
thanks Mactex
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Part 6, 7 & 8 are now online.
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yabba dabba doo! ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D
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Thanks again, Bert, hope you enjoyed the latest episodes. Only two more to come....
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thanks Gromet
and thank you Rbbral looking forward to the last 2 episodes
Mactex
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Just read the next installment - actually I downloaded the whole story to my ereader (for personal reading only) and enjoyed the whole story from the start again. This is a beautiful and engaging piece of prose, sexy naturally but really a great story...
I am so looking forward to what happens next...
Thank you, ever so much...
Rich
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Al,
Loved the episodes! Meeting Mum and Dad? You sadist!!! :):):
You do wander down unexpected pathways! Only two episodes left and so many threads to finish! :-\
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I adore the way this story hops across genres and perspectives.
The shift to Ruby, then back, the shift from the tension of unfamilair bondage to the "mundane" horror of meeting your boyfriends parents, the cunningly phrased bet leading to public predicament.
But most I think I love the characters, the way they resist change to well worn routines and the growth in character that comes with it.
Looking forward to seeing where you will take us next
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Thanks for taking the time to comment. Supportive or critical, I always appreciate feedback. We all write just for the pleasure, but to know people read them, like them and actually then even make comments is a big bonus. This is probably the most comments I've had, and yet, it's probably not my own favourite story, but there you are.
All these nice comments make me feel perhaps I should extend the story, clearly there is lots of potential to extend the existing characters, or bring new ones in. The difficulty in writing a story is not starting, or really getting into it, it's knowing when to stop, for me anyway.
It could go on a long while, but I then I usually think of another completely different story that I can't get out of my mind, so move on, no regrets really.
Anyway, when Gromet posts the last two parts I hope you like them.
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Not sure why this story, of all the great ones you posted, attracts the most comments.
Maybe it's a zeitgeist thing as much as a story one.
This is a relentlessly nice and positive story where kinks are explored, not shamed, people are friendly and understanding.
In a world like we have today I atleas need some of that more than ever.
(which is not to say that I also don't enjoy darker stories but thats besides my point here)
Definitely looking forward to those last parts as well.
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Just finished the last one and I can only say perfect conclusion to the series.
It's sweet, genuinely loving and kinky as fuck.
With these chapters I completely concurr to your sentiment.
Obviously there are still things you could write about but in a way that would be fan service, like a TV series that has gone on for too long.
Thanks for creating this world and I am looking forward to reading your next one