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Other Worlds Section => Pet & PonyGirl Stories => Topic started by: Gromet on March 05, 2018, 07:41:29 am

Title: Secret in the Cellar by Varg the Wanderer
Post by: Gromet on March 05, 2018, 07:41:29 am

You can view the story here on the plaza:

http://www.grometsplaza.net/world/ponygirl/storiessz/secretinthecellar.html
Solo-F; family-gathering; escape; cellar; discovery; dog-hood; rubber; dog-paws; collar; chain; petplay; metal-pants; tail; insert; cage; stuck; caught; shock; cons; X

Please feel free to leave your kind comments & feedback here about this story.
Thanks.  ;)

Title: Re: Secret in the Cellar by Varg the Wanderer
Post by: icy on March 08, 2018, 02:05:49 pm

A great and well written story. I think it could have been a bit more explicit in a few places, but overall really great. Will there be a 2nd part? I hope so...  ;)

Title: Re: Secret in the Cellar by Varg the Wanderer
Post by: jackierabbit1 on March 10, 2018, 12:49:41 pm

I so want to be that dog for the summer! Loved the story, and these three friends will likely have a grand adventure as a new pet must always be properly trained. It sounds like Tony might be the disciplinarian, and therefore the alpha male of the pack, and that submission to his authority could also be fun for the new pet. 

Thanks for sharing, Jackie.