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Other Worlds Section => Pet & PonyGirl Stories => Topic started by: Gromet on September 29, 2017, 08:31:18 am

Title: The Dairy Unit by Robotunit8
Post by: Gromet on September 29, 2017, 08:31:18 am
You can view the story here on the plaza:

http://www.grometsplaza.net/world/ponygirl/storiesad/thedairyunit.html
FF+; F+/f+; lesb; games; dare; fantasy; reveal; milking-machine; breasts; lactate; milk; tease; climax; cum; factory; MF+/f+; bodymod; condition; mc; drug; control; hucows; production; stimulate; secretions; makeup; desire; oral; mast; sex; cons/reluct; X

Please feel free to leave your kind comments & feedback here about this story.
Thanks.  ;)
Title: Re: The Dairy Unit by Robotunit8
Post by: feline on October 17, 2017, 12:12:01 pm
I really enjoyed the first half of this story, playful, teasing, wicked, and wonderful characters showing true acceptance and deep wickedness :)

Seeing the friends rally round and bring such a surprising fantasy to life, so quickly, directly and effectively is really enjoyable :)  I like the whole going with it, the sense of friendly wickedness and pushing the boundaries that goes with it.

The second half, where we meet the researchers, I can see how this follows on, and is a logical extension of the story arc.  Personally though it wasn't what I was looking for, since the mind control aspect took away so much of the wicked friends aspect that I enjoyed so much.  Well written and fun though :)